MY CHRISTMAS MESSAGE TO ALL :)

GET EVOLVED

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

Hope the eyes are dry,

Till the end of our life.

 ..

We shall forget the cry,

When asked to walk on a knife.

 

Life is more than a mystery,

Expect it to be solved.

 ..

We will miss a place in the history,

If we don’t get evolved. 

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

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  • wonder on Dec 24, 2009

    Each of us should try to evolve in our own way, every moment.A great message.

  • abhishek40914 on Dec 24, 2009

    very good poem, hope we all can evovle through our work here at least ;)

  • gaby7 on Dec 24, 2009

    This is the best poem I have ever read here at triond. Thanks indeed.

  • gaby7 on Dec 24, 2009

    This story broke my heart when I first heard it. I never expected this to happen there at all. What even disturbs me the more is the fact that the government of President Laury Aroyo knows the war lords behind these deaths and her inactions are making me very disappointed all this far from Uganda. Leaders there may say this is non of my business, but who enjoys to hear a fellow human being is being killed for political reason however distant one may be from the scene of horror? Well written article here my friend. Thanks.

  • Lord Banks on Dec 24, 2009

    I liked that mate, have a happy Holiday LB

  • bailieman on Dec 24, 2009

    A good sentiment.

  • Gateway to Wizard on Dec 24, 2009

    very artistic…:D

  • AlmaG on Dec 24, 2009

    Deep message, wonderful poem :)

  • Videomark on Dec 24, 2009

    Educating ourselves is a great start.

  • B Nelson on Dec 24, 2009

    ha ha, funny and clever.

  • 8Shei8 on Dec 24, 2009

    Merry Christmas!

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 24, 2009

    What a wonderful message in your poetry. Merry Christmas my friend.

  • xoxo on Dec 25, 2009

    Good poem. Merry Christmas, friend.

  • Ranjan Mathews on Dec 25, 2009

    Evolution alas, without involvement is turning homo sapiens into a crude object fit for museums!?

  • Dame Barbara on Dec 25, 2009

    Very Good!!!

  • tonywriter on Dec 26, 2009

    Great message and well composed Thanks!

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 26, 2009

    This message is so apt. Thanks!

  • diwansetya on Dec 29, 2009

    its great one…..

  • Susan The Poet on Jan 3, 2010

    Powerful message for everyone.

  • Babu from sweden on Jan 8, 2010

    cool!!!!!!!!!

  • Francois Hagnere on Jan 12, 2010

    Great poem. thank you.

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Jan 12, 2010

    Yes, but one must take stock of where one’s talents, likes, and dislikes are likely to be most useful; for to be envolved in what one is not cut out to be envolved with is a misery and may do more harm than good…for example: Like a stoic, passionless personality volunteering at a homeless shelter..may do more harm than good.

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Jan 12, 2010

    Yes, but one must take stock of where one\’s talents, likes, and dislikes are likely to be most useful; for to be envolved in what one is not cut out to be envolved with is a misery and may do more harm than good…for example: Like a stoic, passionless personality volunteering at a homeless shelter it may do more harm than good.

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