There is more than warmth and light to be had.

The sun does not merely rise.
It beckons to me, enticing and sly.
Whomever I will grow to be on this day
It will not be the fault of the star
That shares with me, unwittingly
The warmth of its fervor.
That which I choose is what was chosen
Synchronistic or not.

What if I sang forever
Just to find you?
Would the sounds scraped raw from my throat
let you know how much I care?
There are eternities filled
With my playing of charades
That you cannot surmise.

Whomever I come to be
I will not surrender.
For you, I will bend but not break,
Give without taking,
Cry but not weep.
For you, I would sell my eyes,
But never my heart.

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Comments (9)
  • lindalulu on Mar 20, 2009

    Nice poem, well written and filled with emotion.

  • QueenZee on Mar 20, 2009

    Great Work!

  • CutestPrincess on Mar 20, 2009

    Great poem, strong concept, well written.

  • CE Lewallen on Mar 20, 2009

    there is so much depth and underlying wisdom in this piece. great job!

  • Ruby Hawk on Mar 20, 2009

    Simply wonderful, perfect and exactly right.

  • Melody SJAL on Mar 20, 2009

    Stunning in flow and choice of words. Nice job.

  • Mr Ghaz on Mar 20, 2009

    Excellent! lovely poem. loved it!Thnx 4 sharing

  • teddybear09 on Mar 21, 2009

    Beautiful. simply amazeing

  • Dewan Golam Shafi Choudhury on Mar 22, 2009

    the words are very strong! Well done!
    Keep writing!

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