Christmas will be here soon and I can’t think of any greater gift to receive.

 Love walks in – a long awaited visitor

Bearing an armload of packages

Gifts to me all beautifully wrapped

In brightly colored, shiny paper

Boxes of all shapes and sizes

My eyes light up – joy barely contained

As they are placed before me

Which to open first?

I choose a small yellow box

The color of sunshine

Inside a smile that lights up the room

The next one blue and brilliant as the summer sky

In it, hopes and dreams and plans for our future

There’s a pink one full of joy and happiness

The likes of which I haven’t seen

Since I was a giddy young girl

A purple box, the color of royalty

To remind me that I’ll always be your queen

Green to let me know we’ll be financially secure

Then a box of deepest red

Promises of pure unbridled passion

The last box seems as large as the room

It’s gold and tied with a huge red bow

I know its contents without looking inside

A package this big can only contain your heart

© 2009 – Andrea J. Shannon

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  • ken bultman on Nov 17, 2009

    The gift of love. What a wonderful poem. How sad that some will not receive it this year.

  • Jenny Heart on Nov 17, 2009

    Absolutely loved it!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 17, 2009

    Beautiful poem!

  • Hansika on Nov 17, 2009

    excellant…

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 17, 2009

    That is such a beautiful poem and the gifts so much bettter than any material ones.

    Christine

  • diamondpoet on Nov 17, 2009

    Really beautiful piece.

  • Themax on Nov 17, 2009

    really beautiful,Thanks for sharing :)

  • Goodselfme on Nov 17, 2009

    I sighed throughout the entire poem. The last was the best line. Tx for giving this for sharing to all, who read it. Very well composed.

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Nov 17, 2009

    beautiful as always Andrea, the beauty of love is to be loved.

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Nov 17, 2009

    beautiful as always Andre, the beauty of love is to be loved.

  • K.Reshma on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice one

  • AlmaG on Nov 17, 2009

    This is very beautiful :)
    Everyone needs a gift of love even if it’s not christmas :)

  • lillyrose on Nov 18, 2009

    Beautiful poem, I loved the way you wrote that, very clever!

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 18, 2009

    very beautiful one…

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 19, 2009

    gr8
    lovely

  • deep blue on Nov 19, 2009

    Well crafted poetry. My two thumbs up.

  • Svetlana Cherevik on Nov 28, 2009

    wonderful!

  • neopisiva on May 18, 2011

    Truly the best gifts ever!

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