She says I want to dribble as much blood of my hatred ones as much I surge tears and it’s not two three drops but a deep sea :(

There is good girl gone bad,living in sins

and that turned her to malicious witch.

Her wretchedness was more visible when

she yelled for help but no one came.

She passes along with battalion of ravens

as sign of her grudge.

She likes the nude skeleton trees

dancing on whistling of warm breeze.

Loathe attitude of people living around her.

She smashes roses and plays with thorns.

She like the burning sky,barren fields and hollow streets.

Her brain fries when she look at couple loving.

Dastardly she bites instead of kissing.

People curse and taunt her but no one tries

to rationalize her pain.

Desiring was her weakness,

Now, she left all on fate and not athirst for any thing.

When it rains she prays for flood,

When the wind blows she calls for hurricane,

When clouds rumble she tries to seek tornado

and keep on saying,all I want to see these people die

as they buried me alive.

She knows when she will be on heaven’s gate

angel would say you don’t belong here

that means she is a girl from the hell.

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  • girishpuri on Apr 6, 2012

    awesome piece of poetry, keep wrting..

  • Sandeep Sunny Jasrotia on Apr 6, 2012

    Its so nice dear….Smile..

  • Cassle Tang on Apr 6, 2012

    I like the sentence: people curse and taunt her but no one tries

    to rationalize her pain. I think it’s true.

  • h4mz4h on Apr 6, 2012

    nice poem, keep publishing. :D

  • TIPS2TRICKS on Apr 6, 2012

    horrible and beauty

  • qncai on Apr 6, 2012

    Nice, good image

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Apr 6, 2012

    Excellent poem and fantastic pictures. Keep up the good work

  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 6, 2012

    Great work as usual

  • pulsananda on Apr 6, 2012

    Nice work Aroosa

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  • cryptid on Apr 6, 2012

    Awesome! the pics add a great punctuation mark

  • Kharla Jolly on Apr 6, 2012

    You write from the depths of an extremely, painful heart. It’s obvious, you have a gift to write exactly what you are feeling, at that moment. Thanks, for sharing.

  • Martin Kloess on Apr 6, 2012

    very good

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  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 6, 2012

    Thanks for sharing this with us. Is this really you or just your artistic bend?

  • SoNia0813 on Apr 7, 2012

    very good

  • TIPS2TRICKS on Apr 7, 2012

    hello my friend, your poetry is very good

  • kholil aziz on Apr 8, 2012

    I really like the picture that can dramatize the terrible atmosphere

  • sheilanewton on Apr 8, 2012

    Tremendous writing – awesome images.

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  • girishpuri on Apr 8, 2012

    again here

  • travelnews on Apr 9, 2012

    Excellent poem and fantastic pictures. Keep up the good work

  • tonyleather on Apr 9, 2012

    Great Poem Yet Again. Well Done Aroosa.

  • James Solomianik on Apr 9, 2012

    Very nice

  • vijayanths on Apr 9, 2012

    Another poem of pains.

  • Dreamy777 on Apr 9, 2012

    very nice like always

  • juny423 on Apr 9, 2012

    Another sensational piece :)

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Apr 9, 2012

    Images are very creative and expressive…

  • lauralu on Apr 9, 2012

    kinda scary hope you don’y really feel this bad now
    thanks for sharing

  • nurzaira on Apr 9, 2012

    gloomy poem again.. but you’ve got a great talent for writing dear

  • Angelji on Apr 10, 2012

    and precisely you are not from are an angel from heaven..believe me…You are precious ..very very precious..

  • dwisuka on Apr 10, 2012

    i just can say ‘wow!’

  • Hakarus on Apr 11, 2012

    Honey why u say u r from hell??u r good girl I like u.
    keep smiling :)

  • Tulan on Apr 11, 2012

    Well done, from that point of view.

  • marqjonz on Apr 12, 2012

    You write well about the magical anger behind curses.

    Great lines:

    She likes the nude skeleton trees

    dancing on whistling of warm breeze.

  • TIPS2TRICKS on Apr 13, 2012

    hy, how are u ma friend? wish u great 4ever :)

  • richboync on Apr 13, 2012

    excellent article great job

  • misterdd on Apr 13, 2012

    thanks for share aroosa. better times will come. you will see. every person can be good. people just need to work on that and live in good way.

  • One amigo on Apr 14, 2012

    soon u will find urself in peace I’m

  • pruelpo on Apr 14, 2012

    So powerful I loved it…there are couple of them and they are everywhere…

  • SerraAnnisa on Apr 14, 2012

    Keep writing!

  • rajaryanme on Apr 16, 2012

    A fantastic poem.

  • Ixodoi on Apr 16, 2012

    Touching & great as always.

  • lonelyplanet on Apr 17, 2012

    Its so nice dear….Smile..

  • Safa on Apr 17, 2012

    Aroosa, you are very talented. Fantastic work

  • T. S. GARP on Apr 20, 2012

    Dark and marvelous! This should be expanded into a Gothic book. Keep writing! Excellent work! :)

  • JoniJones on May 13, 2012

    good share

  • ryan75 on May 14, 2012

    you are talented making a poem

  • Sincere504 on Jun 1, 2012

    I love the way your creative mind works. and the art work is on point….

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Jun 2, 2012

    Good writing

  • blanka on Jun 5, 2012

    You know, you’re some kind of girl, girl. Pure talent. You live in America?

  • Chris Bailie on Jun 16, 2012

    Great writing Aroosa, thank you.

  • Pinoydreamer on Jun 21, 2012

    nice post. emo girl

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