Girl in a Cornfield

Lady Sunshine on Feb 7, 2011

Tags: alone, cornfield, girl, Ken Bultman, love, Raven-Haired, scarecrow, senryu, waiting

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Ladies, never stand in a cornfield. lol. A two-part senryu I wrote with Ken Bultman.

A raven-haired girl
Stands alone in the cornfield
Waiting for her love

Her love passed her by -
Gave her the eye but he thought
She was a scarecrow

For another poem by Ken Bultman and I, click here:

http://authspot.com/poetry/little-black-kitten/

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Comments (9)

sandhee on Feb 7, 2011
the girls looks like do not waiting anyone..?hehe.. shes very cute after all
LoveDoctor on Feb 7, 2011
LOL. Had the raven girl just walked on by minding her own business, she would have gotten his attention. Good things come for those who don’t wait.
Larry Fish on Feb 7, 2011
I liked it, interesting.
rajaryanme on Feb 8, 2011
Lovely lines very touching.
Betty Carew on Feb 8, 2011
Delightful read that I really enjoyed Lady Sunshine. Lovely poem and very enjoyable.
papaleng on Feb 8, 2011
This a perfect Haiku,
Heloni Lynn on Feb 14, 2011
Very kewl – thanks for the share!
Erin Miller on Feb 14, 2011
Ha ha nice. I loved the twisted way of it.
Shirley Shuler on Mar 21, 2011
Hi Lady Sunshine, lol, this will remind me never to stand in a cornfield, enjoyed this read.

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