Ode to all the dream girls out there.

Would you believe me,
If I told you,
I dreamed of you.

Long, long ago,
I used to lay on my bed,
Listening to love songs.
Play in my head.

Feeling passion overwhelm me,
Tears flooding my eyes.
My mind painted your portrait,
And here you are materialized.

Perfection!

Flawless complexion,
Enchantment in your smile.
Curvacious from head to toe.
Wrapped in super model style.

Cute little laugh.
Your voice the perfect tone.
Your words like lyrics,
To beautiful love songs I’ve never known.

And oh how I want to listen to them,

Over and over again,
Till the tears flood my eyes,
Like those lonely nights in my bed,
When you were a vision that made me cry.

Only I won’t be sad,
I’ll weep tears of joy,
For you are a dream come true,
To every lonely, love sick boy.

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  • realityspeaks on Nov 27, 2011

    Sweet share

  • oziasrul on Nov 27, 2011

    nice bro

  • Jerremy on Nov 27, 2011

    Nice work :)

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 27, 2011

    Very sweet.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • caribbean369 on Nov 28, 2011

    Its romantic, beautiful, sweet, radiant and just very well put!! The tone of the poem is very beautiful cause it is romantic. The wording for this poem as well is absolutely prefect. Wonderful job on this poem!! :)

  • Kristie Claar on Nov 29, 2011

    lovely

  • Socorro Lawas on Nov 30, 2011

    You have captured her charm in beautiful words.

  • Victoria Jenkins on Nov 30, 2011

    Nice! Very expressive. The part about the supermodel would seem to contradict the curvacious comment, though.

  • Marquis de Joker on Dec 1, 2011

    Dreaming my life away heh heh :) and I like the contradict slip, love is anything but resonable

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