Comments on: Girl on a City Street

By: writeme

writeme — Fri, 08 Jan 2010 02:11:52 +0000

very good message..thanks for sharing

By: Liane Schmidt

Liane Schmidt — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 02:02:12 +0000

Lovely and sorrow-filled.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.

By: thestickman

thestickman — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 23:18:01 +0000

By: nightcharmer

nightcharmer — Thu, 03 Dec 2009 15:47:45 +0000

Wow. That\’s quite a poem. A strong message behind as well. I like how you described in detail and the words you used to describe the girl. Quite a heart-wrenching piece.

By: Frances Lawrence

Frances Lawrence — Thu, 03 Dec 2009 08:52:59 +0000

A very powerful poem. It is so hard to do the righ thing when you have to make a split second reaction.

By: valmnz

valmnz — Thu, 03 Dec 2009 05:37:44 +0000

Thanks Themax, as a mother I can’t believe I walked past her!

By: Themax

Themax — Thu, 03 Dec 2009 05:28:18 +0000

Next time just listen to your heart,very well written poem!
Thanks