Jump in and take a chance on love…

I will take your hands
Feel your human flesh
Give love another chance
As life lays a path

This is genuine love
And not just a dream
You are real, my love
Not an imaginary ghost

I will hold your face
Look deep in your eyes
Find truth and passion
And a place to rest

You are there for me
Waiting and wanting
Ready to give love
Willing to share life

I place my hands in yours
Feel your human flesh
Hold your heart in mine
Like earth holds the sky

You and me, my love
With tears and laughter
For better and worse
Till the end of life!

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  • Ed Moore on Mar 22, 2008

    Hey Icy…very nice. As someone commented to me, you say a lot here without saying it, leaving it to the imagination. Alfred Hitchcock used to do that in his movies. This is very nice. Have a great Easter!

  • b. radley on Mar 22, 2008

    So pretty, Icy. You have great talent.

  • valli on Mar 22, 2008

    It is very nice, Icy.

  • Marcus Edward John Cross on Mar 22, 2008

    Great poem.

  • Judy Sheldon on Mar 22, 2008

    Icy, can I read between the lines here? This is a wonderful poem.

  • Dee Huff on Mar 22, 2008

    Very romantic poem.

  • Alexa Gates on Mar 22, 2008

    that is a beautiful poem! it’s soo pretty!

  • R.B. Parsley on Mar 22, 2008

    Icy,
    This is a fantastic poem. I can feel the love coming through. How so very beautiful love is… And think, the longer it lasts the more beautiful it gets.

    Have a Happy Easter Icy.

    Randy

  • C A Johnson on Mar 23, 2008

    I agree with everyone here. This was a very beautiful poem, Icy. You really are a talented writer. :)

  • Lucy Lockett on Mar 23, 2008

    Each verse was just a mouthful and it had a great beat. Very nice hopeful poetry! I liked it very much.

  • Tarra B. on Mar 23, 2008

    excellent poem, romantic and beautiful!

  • quiet voice on Mar 29, 2008

    …your depth is immense,
    my dear. What talent!
    Beautifully written.

  • MysLykeMeeh on May 1, 2008

    Gentle, passionate, romantic and hopeful piece. TFS.

  • tracy sardelli on May 8, 2008

    what a lovely poem, well done.

  • Debra. on Nov 1, 2008

    Your poems are very sweet.

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Dec 1, 2008

    Very pretty and heartfelt write. :)

    -M

  • AC Hamilton III on Dec 22, 2008

    That’s good for the romantic soul. Feed me more. Outstanding!

  • CdSilva on Mar 29, 2009

    Lovely romantic poem.

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