Give Me a Break

Dehan Nathaniel on Sep 25, 2011

Expressing torment.

Excuse me!

You vampire

You old blood sucker

Stop contaminating my space!

You chat too much

Your tongue is on fire

Your lips in a rush

To propaganda my name!

Lying bastard!

Are you not tired of igniting my pain?

You always smiling

That’s the pretense they are buying

Thinking you’re a saint

Oh deceiver!

Concieted tale bearer!

Please…. give me a break!

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Rosettaartist1 on Sep 25, 2011
I feel the emotion!
Dehan Nathaniel on Sep 25, 2011
Thanks
dazzlejazz on Sep 25, 2011
Wow! That packed a punch Dehan! Nicely written.
Dehan Nathaniel on Sep 26, 2011
Now I’m laughing Dazz. I was feeling upset so I took it out on the paper. Oh boy….
DHEERUMT on Sep 27, 2011
very cool
InspiredTeen17 on Sep 30, 2011
nice
Erna Ermawati on Oct 6, 2011
wooow!! strong words
Scotcha on Oct 7, 2011
Thanks I really liked it.
caribbean369 on Oct 8, 2011
This is a VERY good poem!!! This is very expressive and It was a fun poem to read. Its great to write poems. I think its interesting to look at some many poems and feel so many different emotions in them. When we write things down that matter or not to us. Its actually soppose to relieve pressure and stress we all have. AWESOME poem!!! )
Sierra Michelle Comegys on Oct 13, 2011
Wonderful! Simply heart-stopping. I can feel the emotion dripping from the words. Very well expressed

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