This could make a good church song.

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Give Take Share

13 Mar 2011

Holiness
Spread the feeling
Holiness
Give Give Give
Let your soul let go
Going over everything

He is there
Believe in Him
He is here
Take Take Take
Now your soul is free
Changing this world evermore

Spiritual
Higher than all
Spiritual
Share Share Share
Gather souls to Him
Praising singing ever after
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  • Palestrya on Mar 13, 2011

    Very nice! HE has truly blessed you with imagination and inspiration.

  • Brenda Nelson on Mar 13, 2011

    yes it does have a church song feel to it

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 14, 2011

    I agree with the church feeling that this poem has. You were obviously inspired

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