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Giving Voices

Kairos on Sep 21, 2009
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In a haiku form, a woman’s power is celebrated.

A silent woman

breaking the jar of beauty

creating lovely voices.

Woman,oh woman,

looking behind her shadow

molds,creates, loves her world.

Moonless nights is dark

but  when I scatter the stars

shine like little suns.

Little girl,now  woman

take your lovely feet someplace

create a world of peace.

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  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 22, 2009

    That’s beautiful. You are so clever to write it in haiku form.

    Christine

  • Penggaroo on Sep 22, 2009

    :) another great read today! thanks.

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 22, 2009

    Excellent poem!

  • STEVE666 on Sep 22, 2009

    You’re making haikus look too easy!!

  • Lostash on Sep 22, 2009

    Nicely adapted in to this style!

  • kairos on Sep 22, 2009

    Thanks for your comments. I am practicing this kind of poetry for such a long time. Only now that creative juices come flowing in. And I attributed it to triond for encouraging us to publish.

  • Toni Love on Sep 23, 2009

    Beautiful!!!!

  • V rank on Jan 18, 2010

    This is very a interesting masterpiece…

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