Go Slow

PHILLY DREAMER on Dec 7, 2011

I’m feeling a little romantic with this write.

You start to unbutton your blouse.

One button,

At a time.

After each one is undone,

It reaveals,

Just a little more.

Don’t go too fast,

Ive been waiting for this

For so,

So long.,

And now that this moment is here.

I want to capture it.

Every inch of your skin,

Every supple curve,

I want to replay it in my mind,

Over and over again.

So that when I close my eyes,

All I see is you.

The glory,

Of your beauty,

Far beyond a cry,

Of anything I could have dreamed.

I could die tonight,

Just knowing,

That I finally,

Held you in my arms.

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Comments (11)

caribbean369 on Dec 7, 2011
This is REALLY beautiful!
wonder on Dec 7, 2011
Romantically composed, nice.
mtrguanlao on Dec 7, 2011
Wow,you made me smile! I wish all men would think like that,haha! Love it!
Marquis de Joker on Dec 8, 2011
Girls not happy that some men think like this and we that do get ignored… maybe that’s just me, pretty brillant BTW
Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 8, 2011
wow beautiful.I tried to hold him in my arms but he ran away:(
ImKarn23 on Dec 8, 2011
mmmmmm…foreplay…
sheilanewton on Dec 8, 2011
Mmm…so seductive. Lovely, delightful poetry.

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Jsqc Writer on Dec 9, 2011
Sweet and romantic
indianwriting on Dec 9, 2011
PaulB on Dec 10, 2011
Almost a striptease!
realityspeaks on Dec 12, 2011
Beautiful…

Hi there!