I am beaten by few antisocial elements. Because I was trying to save someone. I am annoyed very much with my limited powers, I am preying to GOD…..

GOD Please come and please listen to me ,

Why you created me with very limited powers ,

Today i could not help a needy person ,

And you can see my bad condition.

Please come and give me super powers ,

Please make me SUPER MAN ,

Who can fly and can help every one ,

If it is not possible , there are many other options ,

You can make me BATMAN ,

He is there when you need him ,

God i can EVEN become WONDER Women ,

She wears good outfit and she can done any thing around ,

I will not mind ,even if you make me a SUPER GIRL ,

She is super smart and comes out all right , the first time ,

Yeah you can make me SPIDER man , who got his powers ,

After being bitten by a ‘ radioactive spider ‘

 i can also become ” MIGHTY mouse ‘

Here i come to save the day

Mighty mouse on the way

GOD  are you listening to me ,

OK make me a good Fairy , one 

That lives in water and dominates the rivers ,

GOD   please come to me , please listen to me…

Suddenly i find  my room IS  full of lights ,

I hear a sweet voice coming from THE  sky ,

My dear son , listen to me carefully ,

I advice you , don’t become a super hero ,

Because they are exposed and can never have  normal life ,

They experience fame but with lots of tragedies ,

I will give you invisible powers ,

Going through solid objects , casting illusions ,

Unlimited learning and stop time ,

Thanks GOD , I shouted happily ,

When i opened my eyes , i first saw my wife with a cup of tea ,

‘GOOD MORNING DEAR’

Why you are shouting in the morning ,

And don’t thank me for tea , it’s my duty

I am speach less , i am shocked

was it a dream or…..

What do you say ?

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Comments (28)
  • naruto100 on Nov 24, 2011

    Ha ha… Good one..

  • Wrath Warbone on Nov 24, 2011

    It would be nice to have super powers, but there would be drawbacks, too, like you say.

  • CHIPMUNK on Nov 24, 2011

    Excellent one super powers sounds a good feeling

  • ricara on Nov 24, 2011

    good job superman. :D

  • megamatt09 on Nov 24, 2011

    Intriguing.

  • mphsglo on Nov 24, 2011

    Very nice.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Nov 24, 2011

    lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz but Lord make everything with master mind and damn sure that can’t be useless there are reasons.I love u my Lord.

  • sheilanewton on Nov 24, 2011

    This was so cleverly themed and crafted. Love it!

  • Yvhes P. on Nov 24, 2011

    Very nice. Thanks for sharing.

  • pattiann on Nov 24, 2011

    I love it! Very clever choice of topic and very well written.

  • misterdd on Nov 24, 2011

    very very good and original :) i like

  • erwinkennythomas on Nov 24, 2011

    great post!

  • Scarix on Nov 24, 2011

    hahaha…awesome

  • girishpuri on Nov 24, 2011

    thanks

  • Phoenix Montoya on Nov 25, 2011

    I’ve enjoyed the read, FB liked.

  • CutezSoNia on Nov 25, 2011

    Thanks for sharing.

  • oziasrul on Nov 25, 2011

    AMAZZZINGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • ittech on Nov 25, 2011

    yh hanuman also haha

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 25, 2011

    We would all love to have super human powers at times but it is not to be. A really enjoyable piece to read.

  • mtrguanlao on Nov 25, 2011

    Funny one,lol!

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Nov 25, 2011

    Lol, thank your wife for the tea and consider yourself blessed. “With great power comes great responsibility”.

  • FX777222999 on Nov 25, 2011

    Really good to know that we have powers to be one of the superheroes.

  • beingwell on Nov 26, 2011

    What a fun read! Thanks!

  • ittech on Nov 27, 2011

    Lord makes the hanuman

  • JoniJones on Nov 28, 2011

    I like it, funny one

  • Kristie Claar on Dec 20, 2011

    good work

  • juliachild on Dec 24, 2011

    thanks for sharing

  • Safa on Apr 28, 2012

    Good one

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