God.

calls for the name of my lord
I want to turn away from darkness
I say the word repentance
before the door closed forgiveness
with the end of my time

praise the lord name
because I know
only on Yourself
I could complain
you only want to hear my complaints

in prayer I promise
comply with all orders
away from any restrictions
by the breath of life that you give
love your servant, my lord

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  • webseowriters on May 15, 2011

    This is the the most lovely poem I ever read on Authspot.

  • arzeniczenon on May 15, 2011

    indeed! great poem…

  • sanaahmed on May 15, 2011

    good one

  • Gail Cavanaugh on May 15, 2011

    Great reverence for the Lord. Thanks!

  • Uma Shankari on May 15, 2011

    Good one…Liked it.

  • CHIPMUNK on May 15, 2011

    great

  • LadyElena on May 15, 2011

    Beautiful, Beautiful Prayer.
    Have a Blessed week.

  • MissAthena on May 15, 2011

    Beautiful job.

  • janef on May 15, 2011

    Lovely poem.

  • Dreamy777 on May 15, 2011

    really nice like it

  • quiet voice on May 16, 2011

    ….Very heartfelt. Thank you.

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on May 17, 2011

    great sharing

  • sanaahmed on May 17, 2011

    100 hits

  • arifeen on May 18, 2011

    Your Poetry skill is unbelievable!

  • neopisiva on May 20, 2011

    Very nice.Great work!

  • xyz999 on May 24, 2011

    What a heartfelt lovely prayer. Nice one!

  • Libra91 on Jun 8, 2011

    Very nice poem,good job!

  • Minister Marlene on Jun 10, 2011

    The ending says it all. We are HIS servants. Good poem to the Lord.

  • reiny on Jun 21, 2011

    always remember for this prayer, God waiting for you :)

  • Kristie Claar on Sep 22, 2011

    great work

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