Just a random poem mainly about.

Going, going, gone

I’m not here anymore

My mind is somewhere else

My body still alone

Why hasn’t anyone come for me

Why have you all passed me by

Why is this such a cold place for me even out in the sun

Going, going, gone

Can anyone hear me

Does anyone care

I am screaming at you

But it seems like you are just too far gone

Going, going, gone

What’s going on here

Do you really not know

I’ve been lying in wait here

In my shallow grave alone

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Comments (4)
  • raman13 on Aug 13, 2009

    Good Poem

    Thanks

    Best Regards

  • jesse lennon on Aug 13, 2009

    I was expecting the ending to end like that,maybe the person moved away or something but dead

  • giftarist on Aug 18, 2009

    I like the metaphor! Thanks for sharing

  • BJ Abadam on Aug 21, 2009

    Thanks I am glad you all liked it.

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