Gone

Lady Sunshine on Aug 27, 2009

Tags: ghost, gone, here, senryu, wind

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A senryu.

A ghost in the wind
You have been gone all along
Even though you’re here

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Comments (11)

ken bultman on Aug 27, 2009
Enjoyed.
Jenny Heart on Aug 27, 2009
Simple yet profound. Like it!
Christine Ramsay on Aug 27, 2009
That is lovely
Collette Edwards on Aug 27, 2009
LOVE IT!! I can relate to this onewell done
maranatha on Aug 27, 2009
What is a senryu?

This struck me as so incredibly sad, having just read and savored your poem “Savior”. Very few words, capturing a life-rocking understanding. Well done.
rutherfranc on Aug 27, 2009
short and meaningful.. looks like you miss him very much..
Shirley Shuler on Aug 27, 2009
Hi Lady Sunshine, Gone, short and to the point, well done!
giftarist on Aug 27, 2009
Great!!
Lostash on Aug 28, 2009
How very pretty!
fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Aug 29, 2009
Very nicely said,
great way with worlds
Ruby Hawk on Aug 30, 2009
I like it.

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