Good Bye Cinderella

LOVELYHONEY on Nov 23, 2009

A poetess of some megalomaniac ego.

Good bye Cinderella

For me you were just

Another lovely Cinderella

You are good

You are beautiful

You keep no promises

I’m sure not doubtful

That time will come

You shall again return

To be just in time

You will leave

Not your sandal this time

But your mind behind

Goodbye Cinderella

I shall still welcome you

In to my fold

Having by you undergone

Pangs of pain untold

Good bye Cinderella

This third time again

When you do make amend

Hope not uselessly by then.

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Comments (12)

CA Johnson on Nov 23, 2009
This is very good. Lovely Honey. I remember Cinderella when I was a kid. Thanks for the reminder.
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 23, 2009
Awe… how reflective your poem was, I like the extenuation that you took with the Cinderella of our past, the part referring to her not leaving her sandal but her mind. Interesting the thought patterns your lovely poem inspired. “Keep up the good work”.
ceegirl on Nov 23, 2009
Nice poem.
Teves on Nov 23, 2009
Dont say goodbye…It hurts.
cebuanaeyez on Nov 23, 2009
I agree with Teves
drelayaraja on Nov 23, 2009
Nice Poem.
wonder on Nov 24, 2009
A lovely poem.
AlmaG on Nov 24, 2009
Great poem LH
papaleng on Nov 24, 2009
fluid flow of emotion. BTW can you send me the title of the poem you wanted me to view?
Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 24, 2009
Cinderella is one of my favorite fairy tales… u have given her a wonderful dedication.. loved the poem!
Melody SJAL on Nov 24, 2009
Nice piece…great photos too.
diamondpoet on Nov 24, 2009
Cinderella has always been one of my favorite stories, thanks for sharing.

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