Poem dedicated to a very courageous,and loving daughter….

Goodbye Dad,

I know you don’t like goodbye’s,

goodbye’s always makes you sad,

makes your heart cry instead of your eyes…..

We all came to say goodbye,

its been a heart wrenching time,

now its our time to cry,

to say our final goodbye…..

Dad your finally been released,

its goodbye to all your sufferings,

your heart has stopped murmuring,

now you can rest in peace…..

Mum and my daughter are here,

we all love you so dear,

it hurt us to see you die,

and its painful to say goodbye…..

The family and friends will come,

your old drinking mates too,

mum use to say they’re all bums,

but you love them so true…..

They all come to say goodbye,

to their favourite southern man,

show their respect as you lie,

and come and shake our hands…..

Oh my Dad why,

why did you have to die,

I’m missing you already,

I don’t want to say goodbye…..

You were a good Dad to me,

had some failings and shortcomings,

but with you I was always happy,

never thought I’d ever be mourning…..

Read from the bible the other day,

when a nice lady called at the door,

it said soon death will be done away,

and goodbye’s will be no more…..

I like the thought of no more goodbye’s,

the lady said it’s true God is not lying,

no more goodbye’s and crying,

no more suffering or any dying…..

Anyway dad we gave it our all,

didn’t we have a ball,

we got you up and walking,

even a smiling and talking…..

Got you doing your sums too,

even if twenty two minus four equals two,

your still top of my class Dad,

in your seventies sick its not too bad…..

We did your final curtain call together,

hey you forgot to do the encore,

never mind you can do it later,

when you hear that greater call…..

I’ll never forget your last hello dad,

how with joy my heart did cry,

one day soon we’ll never be sad,

then there will be no more goodbye…………..end….?????……..

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Comments (14)
  • johnnydod on Feb 11, 2010

    wow what more can I say

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 11, 2010

    Good bye is only temporary! And I do not mind you being a copycat :)

  • AlmaG on Feb 11, 2010

    Fantastic part two!

  • albert1jemi on Feb 11, 2010

    excellent one

  • Mushtaq on Feb 11, 2010

    Very nice poem

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 12, 2010

    Nice one….

  • Muhammad Sohaib Roomi on Feb 12, 2010

    Great Poem Very Well ;)

  • sambhafusia on Feb 12, 2010

    excellent share..well written friend and thanx for sharing this…

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 12, 2010

    Very touching!

  • standingproud on Feb 12, 2010

    Dear Stan, this touched my inner parts so deeply.
    What a outstanding caring Man you are, its the Maori in you wink wink.
    My write and your two poems I have coped and am about to send them home , New Zealand, to my mum, for her she needs.
    I adore how you have compiled and often mentioned parts of my write,my Dad.
    Incredible, mind blowing.
    You made me take medicine, There was a lot I didnt write but you Stan have read between the lines, and gave me a pill, a very happy pill at that.
    Thank you kind sir, thank you dear Stan.
    Bless your little cotton socks

  • Tina Cassello on Feb 12, 2010

    This was a very emotional poem, sad and happy as death is for those who know Christ as their Savior and are sure of a happy eternal life.

  • Stan Wilson on Feb 12, 2010

    thank you all my fellow writers, poets, dreamers, thinkers and romantics.for without your words,there wouldn’t be any love…

  • Rosettaartist1 on Feb 14, 2010

    well written

  • Joan on Feb 17, 2010

    I SO agree with “standingproud”…you read between the lines!!…A great poem!!

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