A poem.

 

You tell me I should be silent, our business I have told,

My soul is still within me, the devil has not been sold;

I care for none of the gossip, I’m proud to have been with you,

You should not let this affect you, unless it’s shameful to you;

F*ck the fact that people know, does this really matter?

Judgement of others – or pure and pleasurable to flatter?

We are what that matters, our relationship needs no flaws,

I understand the privacy but is that just yours?

No details have been uttered, however it’s plain to see,

A connection of such minds, a plain chemistry;

Playful and affectionate, mutual clear friends,

If this is antagonising you, perhaps this should end.

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 19, 2010

    I LIKE THE BOLD USE OF THE FOUR LETTER WORD

    I READ A POEM ELSEWHERE

    AND THEY USED

    ALL AND ONLY FOUR LETTERS WORDS

    IT WASN’T THAT ABSURD

    GR88888888888

  • Night Story on Jan 20, 2010

    This is an interesting piece.

  • Muhammad Sohaib Roomi on Jan 20, 2010

    nice post

  • johnnydod on Jan 20, 2010

    a very complexed poem and it worked well.

  • Bo Russo on Jan 20, 2010

    Perhaps it should end…

  • Michael Eboh on Jan 20, 2010

    Great post. Thank a million times.

  • R G Lowry on Jan 20, 2010

    Very fluent, great poem, loved it, keep up great work, I love your stuff :) x

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