About someone who doesn’t seem to know.

So incredibly gracefully desirable
She dances with the air in strides
That carry her closer to my heart
Her gentle happy acknowledgement
For me with an invitation to try
Was so discretely seductive
And swayed me just right
She laughs with me like an old friend
She pays attention to my thought and word
She teaches me about herself
But does not seem to know
Her own beautiful virtue
And value to me
Shy with the ideas of self importance
She does not seem to hear
That I am endlessly infatuated
And interested beyond compare.

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  • The Quail on Aug 10, 2008

    Another great poem and straight from the heart. Well Done!

  • Tennessee Thompson on Aug 10, 2008

    Good poem. I liked the idea behind the poem and think it was well written. Good job.

  • Mystical Whitewolf on Aug 11, 2008

    Outstanding poem. WTG

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