I lug them home, I lug them back…

There is sits:  my book bag,
Filled to the brim
With two giant notebooks;
Each notebook stuffed
Till it’s spine is sprung
With papers.

Some are hopeful pictures
Where the young artist
Has drawn with heart and soul;
Some are honest efforts
To please their teacher,
Seeking the sunshine of praise.
Some show promise
Of future skill,
Some are breath-taking,
Some will break your heart.

Then there are the ones
Carelessly flung
Onto the page.
Uncaring of result,
Just filling up the hour
Because they can’t be
In PE or band or study hall–
Or anywhere besides school
At all, at all.

There is sits: waiting
For my pronouncement.
With a sigh
For all the things
I would rather do,
I get out my favorite pen,
Boot up the old grade-book program,
And hope the marks I give
Are only grades–
Not the determination
Of someone’s fate.

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  • Mr Ghaz on Sep 2, 2009

    Wonderful and lovely poem as always. well done! Keep it up. LIKED it.

  • giftarist on Sep 2, 2009

    Nicely done..

  • Yovita Siswati on Sep 2, 2009

    Such a good teacher you are. Great work.

  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 3, 2009

    Nice one to share…thanks….

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 3, 2009

    I know the feeling, Daisy. There were times when I wanted to take my paperwork out into the playground and set fire to the lot.
    You express your feelings so well.

    Christine

  • ken bultman on Sep 3, 2009

    Good one, Teach. It’s not the grade but the manner in which you explain it to Mom the next day. lol

  • Joe Dorish on Sep 3, 2009

    A Teacher’s work is not all done at school, good job Daisy.

  • PR Mace on Sep 3, 2009

    I teacher holds so many young futures in her or his hands. I know you will give fair and honest grades. I remember my daughter and her 6th grade class did a play called , ” Working 500 AM to 900 PM What a Way for a Teacher to Make a Living,” and they rewrote a song to the song Working 9 to 5. I have the video I wonder if I can download it? Well done poem with much thought behind it.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Sep 3, 2009

    Well written, art is in the eyes of the beholder and the artist, while classes such as math, science etc. need constant correct answeres.
    A teachers job is never done, her job is not only to teach but to inspire, to find their good qualities and help them to explore them

  • James DeVere on Sep 3, 2009

    When I was at school I used to insert bogus lines like, “The Quick Brown Fox Jumps over the Lazy Dog,” into my papers. The teacher would return an 18/20 mark without ever picking up

    She got horror when I told her! j

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 4, 2009

    Daisy, I have every respect for teachers and it would be wonderful if all our teachers were thoughtful of their students as you are.

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