Poem about a very young girl who remembers her early life and days of spring, in granny’s garden…

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Here I stand tall, wearing the latest fashions,

waiting for granny’s call, in her garden of passion’s…

Those days in the garden, when spring was everywhere,

with tools we were laden, to lay the ground bare…

The air was crisp and cool, flushed my cheek’s red,

and with our working tools, we built garden beds…

We sowed little seeds, carefully in the ground,

the soil was clear of weeds, we planted on little mounds…

Rows were short or long, others shallow or deep,

sometimes we’d sing songs, soon I was ready for sleep…

Of tender age was I, my hands were in a state,

covered in dirt and dry, planting from morn till late…

Granny showed me how, to plant a beautiful garden,

I remember her even now, calling it her little eden…

It seemed like yesterday, with granny I worked and played,

life is never the same, when spring comes again…

To be back there once more, when I was only four,

it would be heaven, in granny’s little garden………..end

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  • drelayaraja on Dec 10, 2009

    Wonderful… I like it.:-0

  • Frances Lawrence on Dec 10, 2009

    A well written poem. I think almost everyone can identify with that desire to reach back to childhood days.

  • ashan1614 on Dec 10, 2009

    I have to agree with Frances. We all want to go back to the simpler days of our childhood. Nice write!

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 10, 2009

    Beautiful poem!

  • Jenna Christiansen on Dec 10, 2009

    For whatever reason….a few times per year, pretty often, I have a flashback and I see/feel myself in the garden with my grandparents…perhaps missing my earlier years…you captured the essence very well….ty

  • Michael Eboh on Dec 10, 2009

    I feel same too becuase I enjoyed many things as a child than now that I cannot do such things especially on morals!

  • Night Story on Dec 10, 2009

    Very nice, it planted such nice memories that it made my heart grow a little bit sentimental.

  • Goodselfme on Dec 10, 2009

    Your words depict this treasured time well!

  • Dame Barbara on Dec 11, 2009

    How charminig! I enjoyed it immensely.

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Dec 11, 2009

    very sweet poem… lovely!!

  • giftarist on Dec 11, 2009

    Lovely..well written!

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