Gravity and Magnetism

ashan1614 on Jan 14, 2010

Tags: attraction, gravity, love, magnetism, Relationships

Sometimes the pull of love is just too strong to fight. I surrender…..

Resisting you is like trying

To overturn the laws of gravity

I’ve tried to break the hold

I even got a running start

The further I got away from you

The harder I fell (in love with you)

I thought I was immune

Finished with romance

My heart like tempered steel

I’ve been through so much

But your love is a strong magnet

How will I ever separate myself?

I told myself that the last time

Was indeed the last time

But here you are

And I am but a mere human

Why would I even attempt

To fight gravity and magnetism?

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ceegirl on Jan 14, 2010
Very nice poem, a lot of feelings.
T. S. Lewis on Jan 14, 2010
Spellbound
ken bultman on Jan 14, 2010
Nice poetic essay about the laws of physics (which are forever unchanging) and love (which can come and go and return.)
LOVELYHONEY on Jan 14, 2010
No magnetism,
No gravity
No man
No woman
And
No woman
No man.

The laws of nature
Are supreme
Gravity is magnetic
Love is gravitational
Without magnetism
We wouldn’t have been

Gravity or magnetism
Say what you want to say
There would’ve been
Nothing common
Man and woman
In between
Themax on Jan 14, 2010
very nice and angelic poem,if your feelings and love is strong it is not easy enough to keep yourself far from your love(laws said)
Thanks Nice and beautiful poem!
lillyrose on Jan 15, 2010
Awww sweet poem. Love is hard and does pull you back and fourth!
Geomorphosis on Jan 15, 2010
Nice write. If I were him I wouldn’t fight it lol
Darla Cooke on Jan 15, 2010
Nice poem.
diamondpoet on Jan 15, 2010
Why do you keep resisting when it is obivous that it\\\\\\\’s pulling you in the direction you know you really want to go? Well? Or else why are you writing these sappy love poems. lol
ashan1614 on Jan 15, 2010
Okay, diamond, you got me…. I know EXACTLY what and who I want. I’m just trying to figure out a way to make a graceful exit.
qasimdharamsy on Jan 16, 2010
Nice one…very nice…
AlmaG on Jan 16, 2010
It’s very beautiful Andrea
Olive B. on Jan 18, 2010
don’t ever try to resist what your heart tells you is right.
Tmrobotix on Jan 19, 2010
*bitter smile envelops my mouth*

So true! I’ve turned my back on someone who I held in love, now she’s turned her back to me and I regret! The magnet that she is, is pulling me, I’ve been so stupid!
deep blue on Jan 22, 2010
I’ll take it from Lisa’s words, ” Love is hard and it does pull you back and forth”.
T.Rex McGoogle on Jan 27, 2010
A very good romantic write written on a higher plane.
Aldrin A Wilding West on Jan 31, 2010
Graceful exits don’t happen….let’s face it, but if you’ve reached the point when you’re seeking one, then you have to remember that once you’re on the other side, the reality will far, far outweigh the worries you had about the fallout you might cause by getting there You know by now that this is one critic who’s willing you on………

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