Poem.

How does it feel to walk free

Like one  released from jail?

 

Face washed only with tears,

and carrying his few possessions in a polythene bag

he hears the lark ascending

for the first time.

 

Life without love is TV on a poor colour setting

Solitude a white painted cell.

but I was ever more alone in your presence

than without you.

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  • Cyni1106 on May 26, 2011

    Yeah, I know how that feels. Been there done that. Good job. :)

  • pattiann on May 26, 2011

    Great!

  • bobie on May 26, 2011

    i saw the movie green miles…its really nice movie.

  • Guy Hogan on May 26, 2011

    Sounds like the narrator is better off without the other person.

  • Steve Weitzner on May 27, 2011

    Very nice poem :)

  • Melody SJAL on May 27, 2011

    So nicely penned.

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