Greener Pastures

suzan mehmet on Feb 28, 2009

Tags: blindness, green, pastures

If only we could all unite and rebel against a world so full of animosity and violence. We could make this world a better place because we have already been given it. Only we have turned this living planet into a manipulated planet scaring and tearing everyone a part.

It taketh me
To greener pastures
Fresh and new!…
Into a world
Full of peace
To where you can
Put your feet up
And admire the view!…
People were relaxed and calm
No one ever did no harm
Words of kindness
Did comfort me
It was the best place to be
Living a life with this sort of wealth
Gave me strength and back my health
Only we have all strayed from this blindness
Due to lifes demanding chores!

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papaleng on Feb 28, 2009
nice one and powerful ,the message sent loud and clear.
Darla Smith on Feb 28, 2009
Wonderful poem!
rutherfranc on Feb 28, 2009
wish we can all find the serene place you so described.. beautiful piece..
V Frost on Feb 28, 2009
very descriptive. Great imagery. I like!
THEMADTYPER on Feb 28, 2009
GOOD JOB i LIKE READING YOUR WORK KEEP WRITING i WILL KEEP READING
Holly J. Harrington on Feb 28, 2009
Well done.
Joni Keith on Feb 28, 2009
Nice work.
LOVELYHONEY on Feb 28, 2009
i am a revolutionist pl ease hear me
to enjoy life deprivation is necessary had u not been this lovely poem would not have been the outcome. we all desire to have longer moments of joy but sad ones too come and go sad ones last longer down memory lane we should curtail them if in life happy we desire to remain. hope u like my off the cuff note ,here i am to only happiness promote.
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amanda0051 on Feb 28, 2009
Very beautiful..you kept the flow nicely.
Fresh Writing on Feb 28, 2009
Hello, Suzan!

Very good work; I have to agree with Amanda in that you kept the flow going nicely and with style.

Excellent poem; it was a pleasure to read.

-Fresh Writing
Clay Hurtubise on Feb 28, 2009
Very nice. I use to have to climb a mountain to find that peace, now I just need to sit still and meditate.
Thanks,
Clay
Lee Altman on Feb 28, 2009
powerfully written,Lee
Vikram Chhabra on Feb 28, 2009
I feel the same many times. Thanks for posting!!
Pete Macinta on Feb 28, 2009
Nice
CutestPrincess on Feb 28, 2009
liked it… it really inspire me…
macon on Feb 28, 2009
good work. how i wish that could exist in all of us.. that we could go to those greener pastures..
miraj on Mar 1, 2009
A lovely message indeed,this should be recited to the world leaders hungry for power.

my deepest respect and gratitude,suzan
LOVE IS ALL

Walk in beauty change the world.
Michael Stonecipher on Mar 1, 2009
Your poetry is well written and honest. Compassion and respect are the roots of peace. I would like to add you to my friends list…
Melody SJAL on Mar 2, 2009
Written in raw passion and honesty…lovely piece!
Dee Gold on Mar 3, 2009
you shared with us a wonderful scene
fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Mar 3, 2009
well written, and very on the mark.
It would be a great world if the scene can truly be created.
George W Whitehead on Mar 4, 2009
Beautiful, suzan.
Mark S Stephens on Mar 5, 2009
Prayers spoken in verse well written

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