Join me if you dare !!!!!!

On a
dark
and
lonely night
I walked through
the grounds of
Greystones Mansion.
The thin and scrawny branches
on the trees
swayed
and creaked!!!
Their tone so cold
and
eerie!!
I am here !!!
I am here !!!
I am here !!!
Like a mimic
screeching
in cutting silvery
sharp
tones.

.

Source: freewallpaper.com I shuddered
down deeper
than my boots.
I tried to hide
out of sight
inside my coat.
As if to keep out spirits.
But
cold
crooked fingers
pointed
and
almost touched
my
goose pimpled skin.
A stale breath rasped
and grated
on each of my shredded
taut nerves.
Let me go!!!
Let me go!!!
Let me go!!!
A rasping
sharp glint
cut through
my vision
like a deliberate tear
in silken black cloth.
Damaged beyond repair,
a split never to heal !!!

Source: ffreewallpaper.com A beating pulse
throbbed
like a drum
inside my head;
I move forward
in
robotic
movements;
my footsteps crunching
squashing
so loud in a cold
image.
Do I hear footsteps
in time
with my
own!!
A tone for a tone!!!
a step for a step!!!
faster faster!!!
slower slower
step for step
tone for tone
pace for pace !!!!

Source: freewallpaper.com The moon shone
but almost hesitantly
almost evil
and
cursed.
It shone
it’s crooked beam
onto the
splintering fingers
of the
old oak tree!!
These fingers pointed
I was so sure
straight at me!!!
The north wind
shrieked
“Why did you do it??!!!”
Almost
like the shriek
of a werewolf
and those fingers came
nearer
and
nearer
and
so much
nearer!!!!

What is it???!!!
Who is it???!!!
Join me if you dare for Chapter 2 to find out !!!! Source: freewallpaper.com

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  • roviepacaldo on Jun 16, 2012

    vivid description of events. God bless.

  • evcalangian on Jun 16, 2012

    Great imagery. And unique theme.

  • luthvy on Jun 17, 2012

    like this and good job girl

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  • Mariooh on Jun 17, 2012

    great..u made an arresting start !!

  • lauralu on Jun 17, 2012

    Spooooooky, Nice photos ^_^

  • Martin Kloess on Jun 17, 2012

    well written piece – thank you

  • Eunike on Jun 17, 2012

    Scary, but good pictures

  • Eiddwen on Jun 20, 2012

    Thank you to each and every one of you for reading and commenting.
    Eddy.

  • Stessily on Jun 21, 2012

    Eddy, I’m glad that I’m reading this during the day! Well done and with perfect photos! Those trees with eyes are particularly scary.
    Best wishes always, Stessily

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