From:Catherine
9/20/2011.

Feeling gritty and torn

betrayed,in a corner,and sore

knocked around,used ,and guess what?

you wonder women why us men don’t give a damn

like Steve Martin says in a funny movie “you rip and tear our hearts out , then throw it on the floor stepping and crushing it with your high heels, and then pick it up and say,”here honey eat it ,it taste good”"

yeah I still look at tits and ass

waving and wondering around

don’t care if that’s politically correct either

but that’s all 

instead of your occasional porn

but in these years of 43

I’m feeling gritty and torn           -B 

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  • Redfiery on Sep 21, 2011

    U always surprise me BRuce. Wait a minute I will also write one satirical note about few woman around me[ equally sarcastic]. Good work once again …

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