Sometimes I have a feeling to write but the vision has not become clear keeping balance and in a state of ambiguity. I wish I could pay for the answer as if I were buying a piece of candy.

Three beads bounce back and forth
The ping hits with a ding rung good
Yellow, red and blue collide
Ambiguity, imbalance and something else?
Vaguely, there is a feeling of four 
Maybe the cardinal directions 
with me standing at the fifth place
Rightly can’t explain it, but there’s
a flavor I’m trying to achieve
quarter after quarter turn
spinning the dial again and again 
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Comments (5)
  • diamondpoet on Nov 20, 2009

    I love gum balls, interesting write, unusual topic.

  • ashan1614 on Nov 20, 2009

    Wouldn’t it be great if we could formulate our lives that way? A few quartesr, a few spins of the dial, and just the right “flavor” falls into place.

  • ashan1614 on Nov 20, 2009

    And wouldn’t it be great if I could type?????

    That should say “quarters”.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 20, 2009

    Not sure I understood.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 21, 2009

    Interesting.

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