Haiku (+1/line)

Kris Snow on Oct 23, 2009

Tags: haiku+1, not a haiku, poem, Poetry

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I was bored, so I did what any poet should do when they are bored, I broke the rules.
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6-8-6 for metrics, and you can all just deal with it.

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guy walks into a bar

walks right up to the bartender

asks for some time to think

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Please comment or click “I Like It” if you do!

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Comments (12)

Petalm on Oct 23, 2009
I love this one.
Debra. on Oct 23, 2009
I like the simplicity of it.
wonder on Oct 23, 2009
So natural.
chitragopi on Oct 23, 2009
Good idea. It is sometimes fun to break rules.
cardy on Oct 23, 2009
I like it! quite a lot going on if you read between the lines Nice work!
alc on Oct 23, 2009
I thought it was a great piece! Thanks for sharing it!
Darla Smith on Oct 23, 2009
Very nice!
cutedrishti8 on Oct 23, 2009
A great piece of work
papaleng on Oct 23, 2009
nicely composed one.
kellyme86 on Oct 23, 2009
This is awesome!
Sourav on Oct 23, 2009
Nice…
Steven West on Oct 31, 2009
Nice Haiku. I’ll drink to that.

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