Haiku: Flashbacks

cuddlypoo on Nov 17, 2010

Tags: Dreams, Haiku, poem, unforgotten

Memories are like shadows. It haunts you even when you sleep.

After 6 years, I finally made another haiku. It took me a long time to make one since I prefer making poems. But haiku is a challenge because it should always be 5-7-5. And I love a challenge nowadays.

So here is my composition:

Flashbacks

Dreams and fantasies

Unforgotten memories

Please stop haunting me

Break-ups are difficult to absorb. We have a hard time forgetting the one who hurt us. Because once upon a time, they gave us love. But not all endings are happy. Reality bites!

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Larry Fish on Nov 17, 2010
Very well put.
yuilockhart on Nov 17, 2010
nice one!!
LCM Linda on Nov 17, 2010
Well said. Nice share.
Raj the Tora on Nov 18, 2010
excellent haiku. I love the haikus as they pose challenge to the poets!
crisdiwata on Nov 18, 2010
very nice, true memories are always there…
Ubel Ein on Nov 18, 2010
I know nothing about Haikus, …but not only do I like this, I have also learned something about them. Ha
dino renaldo on Nov 19, 2010
good one

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