Haiku – I Once Had a Fall

Starpisces on Nov 23, 2010

Tags: fall, Haiku, pain, polar bears, stand

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I once had a fall

But now the pain I have no more

I learn to stand tall

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Comments (23)

Aiyanna on Nov 23, 2010
You brought a smile to my face!!!
Luna Morena on Nov 23, 2010
Beautiful haiku my friend, love the pictures and I´m agree, you made me smile too. Thank you!
Videomark on Nov 23, 2010
I hope the bear left the RR tracks. Great pics.
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Nov 23, 2010
this is a delighful haiku, coupled with lovely photos. i enjoyed it all. thanks for the lovely share.
Davanita on Nov 23, 2010
That was awesome
Brenda Nelson on Nov 23, 2010
poor widdle polar bears
Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 23, 2010
You are very funny.
albert1jemi on Nov 23, 2010
well written
giritharanj on Nov 23, 2010
nice share – gj
LCM Linda on Nov 23, 2010
Very encouraging haiku. The 2nd photo is particularly lovely. Great share.
Eunice Tan on Nov 23, 2010
How cute
Anuradha Ramkumar on Nov 24, 2010
Very nice haiku…polar bear were too good.
papaleng on Nov 24, 2010
good Haiku to go along with cute photos. Love it!
SharifaMcFarlane on Nov 24, 2010
Good poem Star
gaby7 on Nov 24, 2010
Nice one!
Sharif Ishnin on Nov 24, 2010
I once had a fall too. It still aches in my head.lol. Very nice work. StarP.:)
Jessie Will on Nov 25, 2010
Falls are good since they are followed by raises. But they can be painful indeed ,ouch. Hey, and let someone take the bear off the rails, it worries me.
Temjen Imchen on Nov 26, 2010
very well illustrated, nice one.
yes me on Nov 27, 2010
Liked this one cheers
J M Lennox on Nov 28, 2010
Gorgeous.
Likha on Nov 29, 2010
Cute! Cute! That was a good fall!
Brewed Coffee on Nov 30, 2010
That bear is so cute! I wonder what he’s doing on the railways
CA Johnson on Dec 1, 2010
I really enjoyed your haiku. The pic of the bear falling put a smile on my face.

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