Another friendship haiku, from me to you.

It must be telepathy

You seem to know what I mean

Without me explaining

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my earlier but recent post :

http://authspot.com/short-stories/smile-in-the-face-of-death/

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  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 26, 2010

    A nice little one

  • diamondpoet on Apr 26, 2010

    Very nice post.

  • Brown Pelican on Apr 26, 2010

    Nice :)
    I’ve always been interested in poetry.

  • Starpisces on Apr 26, 2010

    Thanks friends for your prompt nice comments.
    Hi, new friend Brown Pelican, thanks, yes, agree, we will get along as I’m also quite timid in nature too.

  • wonder on Apr 26, 2010

    How well you expressed this!

  • PR Mace on Apr 26, 2010

    Cute little verses.

  • Shamyl on Apr 26, 2010

    So sweet.

  • Sharif Ishnin on Apr 26, 2010

    Cutesy haiku. Very short and adorable too.

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 26, 2010

    My hubby is like that. I have to watch what I am thinking. A great haiku.

    Christine

  • deep blue on Apr 26, 2010

    Such short but nice thought.

  • VTech on Apr 26, 2010

    Good Post

  • giftarist on Apr 26, 2010

    Cute and nice thought.

  • Starpisces on Apr 26, 2010

    Thanks everyone for your support. This is just to say hello to all of you. Will write something in the near future, see you soon and take care.
    :)

  • drelayaraja on Apr 26, 2010

    Great one. Well said. It must be telepathy

  • Videomark on Apr 26, 2010

    Very nice.

  • Eunice Tan on Apr 26, 2010

    Nice one.

  • athena goodlight on Apr 27, 2010

    Very nice poem. :) I like it.

  • jessieagudo8 on Apr 27, 2010

    it’s cute…thanks for sharing

  • sara20 on Apr 28, 2010

    Nice to read your Article, Keep writing more about it. Is is really Graceful and very well written skill. Thanks for sharing.

    Sara

  • lillyrose on May 2, 2010

    true friendship! I loved it

  • Jewelstar on May 2, 2010

    So sweet and so cute. Very simple. yet it made me smile :)

  • lillyrose on May 3, 2010

    just thought of another comment for this work!!

    It is…..

    “I knew you were going to say that!” LOL

  • sasuke191 on May 8, 2010

    its cute!..

  • LCM Linda on May 4, 2012

    Star, it’s a sweet and lovely haiku, an enjoyable read. Have a nice day.

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