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Haiku “New View”

Goodselfme on Dec 17, 2009
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A poem to set my record straight in my mind. Sometimes I need to be reminded.

 

Photo is a grizzly bear in a private bear park in Martin City, Montana courtesy:  Roberta Baxter

A Haiku  “New View”

 

Anticipation

Serendipitous for me

New path to follow

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  • CHAN LEE PENG on Dec 17, 2009

    Great haiku. I don’t understand “Serendipitous”, could you teach me? Thanks.

  • AlmaG on Dec 17, 2009

    I love this haiku it’s very inspiring! :)

  • Poetic Enigma on Dec 17, 2009

    I like this haiku, very well penned
    and I like the picture too

  • V rank on Dec 17, 2009

    Your haiku captures your posted photo…

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Dec 17, 2009

    lovely haiku…

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 17, 2009

    That is such a good one.

    Christine

  • ken bultman on Dec 17, 2009

    Beary nice. Turn that new leaf.

  • drelayaraja on Dec 17, 2009

    wonderful haiku.. Nice use of the word serendipitous.

    Meaning for LEE: Lucky in making unexpected and fortunate discoveries

  • Kate Smedley on Dec 17, 2009

    Sometimes we all need it, this is a lovely haiku and picture.

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 17, 2009

    Beautiful work and great inspirational piece. That bear certainly inspired you.

  • deep blue on Dec 17, 2009

    Serendipity is being right there at the right time by chance. A good timing to one’s options or being with luck. Am I correct? A deep haiku for my friend Chan was asking. Thanks, Rob.

  • Jenny Heart on Dec 17, 2009

    Deeo blue helped me understand that one word. It just made me know how special your poem really is. Great one!

  • papaleng on Dec 17, 2009

    a great reminder in such a short poem.love this Haiku

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 17, 2009

    Great haiku and I really like the pic.

  • PR Mace on Dec 17, 2009

    Nicely written just stay out of the path of the bear.

  • CA Johnson on Dec 18, 2009

    This is a very good haiku.

  • xoxo on Dec 20, 2009

    Good one, madame. Short yet meaningful,

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