Around 6AM this morning I woke with an interesting thought. This became a string of words so I dashed downstairs for my notebook and pen. At 6.30 my second Haiku was born.

Image by Vincent Teeuwen via Flickr

Sex is a tickle

That explodes upon the world,

A shower of Love

Paul Butters

Check out my first one:      http://authspot.com/poetry/haiku-one-5/

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  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 24, 2011

    lovely write up like it

  • PaulB on Apr 24, 2011

    Cheers Chipmunk. I think it is more meaningful than my first Haiku. Got it published without any padding too. Should be popular with the tags I have used.

  • Edsss on Apr 24, 2011

    Its beautiful!

  • Lord Banks on Apr 25, 2011

    Very good keep on trucking! LB

  • Darlene20 on Apr 30, 2011

    Very good.

  • lightfang on May 16, 2011

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