Haiku Untitled

Poeta Nascitur Non Fit on Jul 27, 2011

Tags: African American Poetry, fist, Haiku, Jerry Bradford, orange county poets, palms, poetic forms, Poetry

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We all have our burdens to bear.

The palms of my hands

Tell stories of dark deep lines

Hidden in closed fist

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LoveDoctor on Jul 27, 2011
This is really good. I like it.

Thanks for reading my work.
Rosettaartist1 on Jul 27, 2011
good one again
ashan1614 on Jul 27, 2011
Ain’t it the truth? We often use that fist to fight off anyone who wants to delve into stories too deeply.
The Real Poet on Jul 27, 2011
Your gift of script stings

Your words permeate life

In them victory
Poeta Nascitur Non Fit on Jul 28, 2011
Love it RP!
Poeta Nascitur Non Fit on Jul 28, 2011
Thank you Ashan, and Rosetta Artist
totsymae on Jul 29, 2011
Love it. Powerful words told in just a few. I really love this.

http://www.totsymae.com
Poeta Nascitur Non Fit on Jul 30, 2011
Thank you Ms.
Krupali on Oct 29, 2011
profound. haiku takes skills! u’ve got em

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