Haiku- Untitled

ghostwriter84 on Dec 1, 2010

Tags: coward, Haiku, poem, Poetry, untitled

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Haiku.

Cry, coward, please cry.

Wallow in your loneliness.

If only you knew.

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Comments (8)

alvinwriter on Dec 2, 2010
Good!
Guy Hogan on Dec 2, 2010
A tight piece of writing with a lot of punch.
westgi on Dec 2, 2010
Thanks for visiting! beautiful! gigi
surymilan on Dec 2, 2010
short and sad
aleah on Dec 2, 2010
wow, nice one. i tried writing haikus before but i was never good at it.
The Real Poet on Dec 2, 2010
master of succinctness; wonderful
Mary Patricia Bird on Dec 5, 2010
I like this one. Good job.
paree2010 on Dec 7, 2010
I always admire people who can get the 5\7\5 moras correct.
good job.

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