A haiku poem about Spring.

Lambs are frolicking,

Daffodils are opening,

It must be springtime.

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  • JNV on May 31, 2007

    You seem to enjoy writing this style.

  • kayla on Apr 30, 2008

    i love it

  • kayla on Apr 30, 2008

    hey same here if you no animal cruility is happening try and find some way to stop it it is wrong and we are letting it happen right here in America it is worse in china and other forgin countries but lets take it one step at a time so do the little things first it will make a bigger difference than you think always remember it is the little things that count

  • Heart Stone on Jun 15, 2008

    Hey so simple but rock!~

  • Jessie the hottest chic! on Jul 2, 2008

    So………….. uh……… short! I mean you must write about beauty! I don’t really like it but if this is crazy way of writing it……… I GIVE IT 2/100!!!!!!!! improve girl! I have blonde hair and I am smarter than u! I have thousands of smart friends. I got millions of bfs too! and I did french kissing girl! I like the other poems except this!

  • jay balmera on Sep 2, 2008

    ya its so nice that having friends like them

  • jay balmera on Sep 2, 2008

    i agree that u give me to improve but im smart as think ur friends

  • mdegenhardt on Sep 3, 2008

    This has perfect form and the flow and imagery are superb for this Haiku. Very well written. Michael

  • Aardaerimus on Oct 23, 2008

    Excellent haiku. :-)

    To those who think it’s merely “short poetry”, me thinks you should learn the rules of haiku before you embarrass yourselves. ;-)

  • 2tet on Oct 31, 2008

    simple yet of tremendous thought… I believe you can try a riddle…

    Best regards and keep reading,
    2tet

  • Franchesca on Feb 23, 2009

    Nice haiku. I liked it! Will you read and comment on mine? If so, thank you.

  • suzan mehmet on Feb 27, 2009

    Beautiful verse. Those three lines says it all. Best wishes suzan mehmet

  • Mimi on Apr 26, 2009

    hey, Jessie the “hottie”: i bet ur ego is 1000 times bigger than ur brain. u sound like some1 who has NO idea what ur talking about, u just like to complement urself. All u did was make u sound like an idiot. Google something b4 u diss it.

  • coker on May 4, 2009

    im gonna have to agree with mimi…”haiku”
    spring is here and so far its been nice…nice haiku
    later

  • Keanu on May 5, 2009

    its boring i love it comments stink

  • Joshua on May 5, 2009

    i love it

  • jen on May 26, 2009

    wateva

  • jen cutie gurl on May 26, 2009

    it is SOOOOOO boring k….. wateva peace i out

  • Allena Impire on May 30, 2009

    Cool.

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