hey same here if you no animal cruility is happening try and find some way to stop it it is wrong and we are letting it happen right here in America it is worse in china and other forgin countries but lets take it one step at a time so do the little things first it will make a bigger difference than you think always remember it is the little things that count
Heart Stone on Jun 15, 2008
Hey so simple but rock!~
Jessie the hottest chic! on Jul 2, 2008
So………….. uh……… short! I mean you must write about beauty! I don’t really like it but if this is crazy way of writing it……… I GIVE IT 2/100!!!!!!!! improve girl! I have blonde hair and I am smarter than u! I have thousands of smart friends. I got millions of bfs too! and I did french kissing girl! I like the other poems except this!
jay balmera on Sep 2, 2008
ya its so nice that having friends like them
jay balmera on Sep 2, 2008
i agree that u give me to improve but im smart as think ur friends
mdegenhardt on Sep 3, 2008
This has perfect form and the flow and imagery are superb for this Haiku. Very well written. Michael
Aardaerimus on Oct 23, 2008
Excellent haiku.
To those who think it’s merely “short poetry”, me thinks you should learn the rules of haiku before you embarrass yourselves.
Nice haiku. I liked it! Will you read and comment on mine? If so, thank you.
suzan mehmet on Feb 27, 2009
Beautiful verse. Those three lines says it all. Best wishes suzan mehmet
Mimi on Apr 26, 2009
hey, Jessie the “hottie”: i bet ur ego is 1000 times bigger than ur brain. u sound like some1 who has NO idea what ur talking about, u just like to complement urself. All u did was make u sound like an idiot. Google something b4 u diss it.