Blackout

Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. on Feb 13, 2009

Tags: arts, cold, dark, Haiku, night, Poetry, Power outage, voices

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About power failure.

Dead voices complain
In the dark of cold night:
A total blackout.

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Comments (3)

Shari86 on Feb 13, 2009
Nicely done, although I’d prefer not to think it was about a power cut, and to make up my own meaning for the ‘black out’.
OhSugar on Feb 13, 2009
Nice. However, it makes me think about the dead, being in total darkness.
Holly J. Harrington on Feb 13, 2009
Awesome.

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