Summer haiku.
blue sparkling waters
flowing with the summer’s sun
triumphant journey…
This haiku is not so bad, but remember that haikus are tried to be written with the fewer adjectives you can. In this one the adjective blue spoiles this piece a bit. Instead of blue try the or some and this haiku will turn out to be good.
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haikus are so easy to do, but i do like your work.
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