Summer haiku.

blue sparkling waters

flowing with the summer’s sun

triumphant journey…

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  • loualbert on Sep 7, 2009

    This haiku is not so bad, but remember that haikus are tried to be written with the fewer adjectives you can. In this one the adjective blue spoiles this piece a bit. Instead of blue try the or some and this haiku will turn out to be good.

    Check me out on the site. I`ll be glad if you do!

  • willie wondka on Sep 7, 2009

    haikus are so easy to do, but i do like your work.

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