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Devour Me

Lady Sunshine on Feb 1, 2009
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Hwang eating Mi-Na up.

With your mouth, take me
With your tongue, tantalize me
Devouring me…

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  • papaleng on Feb 1, 2009

    Ha, ha, ha, that\’s nice.. Keeping your readers wondering what will be the next scene.. nice concept..

  • F J McCarthy on Feb 1, 2009

    Very Nicew poem, exodic and erotic.

  • S M Blomker on Feb 1, 2009

    very erotic idea of feeling you have here.

  • Shirley Shuler on Feb 1, 2009

    Can’t wait for what’s coming next!!!

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