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Downpour(haiku)

Michele Cameron Drew on Nov 5, 2008
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A haiku about the beginning of a sudden storm…

Great clap of thunder
Lightning fills the sky
Torrential downpour follows

         —Michele Cameron Drew

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  • Reilley on Nov 5, 2008

    Excellent job!

  • Michael Degenhardt on Nov 6, 2008

    A lovely read that has terrific form and flow for the style. Very well written. Michael

  • gabbic1219 on Nov 9, 2008

    how true that is …perfect images!

  • Judy Sheldon on Nov 15, 2008

    I love thunderstorms, and I could nearly hear one with your words.

  • Tony Downing on Nov 19, 2008

    I love this M, but the last line needs to be in the middle for the 5/7/5 form. ;) ~T

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