Hwang is Mina’s most delectable treat.

So scrumptious, my sweet
I want to eat you up, love
My mouth watering

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  • Shirley Shuler on Feb 17, 2009

    And may I say what a sweet treat Hwang is!!

  • F J McCarthy on Feb 17, 2009

    Love makes you hunger.

  • myron lysenko on Feb 17, 2009

    It’s a lovely, romantic poem! delicious.

    I don’t think it’s a haiku, but that probably doesn’t matter to you, eh?.

    cheers,
    myron

  • Yovita Siswati on Feb 18, 2009

    make me want to taste it too

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