Erosion

F J McCarthy on Apr 2, 2009

Tags: erosion, Haiku, Poetry

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A three part Haiku.

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Slowly water moves

A stream becomes a river.

Forming canyon walls

Volcano erupts

Oceans boiling into steam

Hot Island forming

Wind and rain mixing

Ripping hard across the land

mountain now is gone

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Comments (11)

Kate Smedley on Apr 2, 2009
Beautiful imagery FJ, great job.
Alicia Wind on Apr 2, 2009
it’s tranformation of nature , I guess…even before –physical changes about the environment was happening…
Dee Gold on Apr 2, 2009
keep it up
Christine Ramsay on Apr 2, 2009
That is so good. A development of a typical haiku. Beautiful imagery.

Christine
hollynoel001 on Apr 2, 2009
this is very descriptive great job
nutuba on Apr 2, 2009
Beautiful haikus!
Juancav on Apr 2, 2009
Great the earth in evolution.
rutherfranc on Apr 2, 2009
the power of erosion.. somehow I feel like you are describing more than nature but episodes of life itself..
ShaFar on Apr 2, 2009
Describes nature at a very strong point.
Kimberly Moore on Apr 4, 2009
Great vision and picture!
Joni Keith on Apr 19, 2009
You’ve painted a picture with your words.

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