A haiku tribute to our ocean friends.

Swimming in the sea.

Through day and night, calm and storm

Swimming endlessly.

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  • Johanny Lisbeth on Sep 8, 2009

    awww love the picture! and cute haiku I love sea animals

  • Yovita Siswati on Sep 8, 2009

    nice haiku!

  • Ronne on Sep 9, 2009

    hey Fj,

    the usual —–> THE AWESOM

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 9, 2009

    The haiku is beautiful and such a good match to the picture.

    Christine

  • Nikita K on Sep 9, 2009

    I like the idea very much because instead of describing the sea I like the thought put into it. Good attempt!

  • papaleng on Sep 9, 2009

    as usual, LOVELY!

  • Juancav on Sep 10, 2009

    Well done.thank you.

  • hollynoel001 on Sep 10, 2009

    great pictures and haiku!!

  • David Cartier on Sep 19, 2009

    smells kind of fishy to me

  • Pablina on Oct 19, 2009

    so true.

  • xinnianhao on Nov 8, 2009

    Nice job!

  • drelayaraja on Nov 22, 2009

    Good one. crispy fish.

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