Naked Haiku

F J McCarthy on May 14, 2009

Tags: corn, FJ McCarthy, Haiku, humor, Poetry, Writing

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A humorous Haiku.

Image via Wikipedia

Running naked free

Across the golden cornfields

Stumble could be bad

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Comments (15)

F J McCarthy on May 14, 2009
This was written for fun,sorry if I have offended any Haiku enthusiast
cardy on May 14, 2009
I like this want to know what comes next made me smile
Katie Marie on May 14, 2009
LOL I think that’s Iowegian Haiku from the land of corn country.
nutuba on May 14, 2009
This is funny!
oo Lefty on May 14, 2009
I tried to publish a two line poem and Triond said it was to short…I never thought of calling it a Haiku….Good Haiku I like the picture the best!!:)
Kate Smedley on May 14, 2009
Lol … had to read it when I saw the title FJ. Stumble could indeed be funny!
cafftee on May 14, 2009
Ouch! Stubble could be bad too!!
DA Cournean on May 14, 2009
Nice! Ouch!
Darla Cooke on May 15, 2009
Great haiku and very funny! I really like it a lot.
Juancav on May 15, 2009
Great ,but I won´t stumble it.Lol.
papaleng on May 16, 2009
This was so nice. stumble is a no, no!!! LOL
Denise Kawaii on May 16, 2009
Ah! Don’t trip!
Sheila M on May 17, 2009
That’s hilarious=)
Janet65 on Jun 4, 2009
I really like this Haiku. So free! And a good Ah Ha moment.
Janet
C LEBLANC on Sep 28, 2009
A truly great haiku.

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