Like the images you have described here; the photo is awesome, too!

“dancing in the pastel breeze” — that is a nice image. Nicely done my friend.

So beautiful.

Wonderful poem nutuba an ode to spring….. wish our spring would start I can’t wait.

beautiful ode to a lovely flower.. like it.

beautiful poem

Is there anything you can’t write? This is beautiful

You paint such a lovely picture. And the photo is exquisite.

Beautiful picture and words. I awoke to snow…again. : (

I think the three are very beautiful. I\’m not a big fan of haiku but I like yours.

I would think you would dedicate this to poor Aunt Ruth!
Thanks,
Clay

Although I as well am not a big fan of haikus/cinquains (my apologies for the incorrect spelling), you have created something special here. Excellent word choice and imagery-they juxtapose nicely.

Keep up the good work!

-Fresh Writing

Excellent! that was wonderful and lovely poem..Beautiful pics too. I always enjoyed with your work. Well done and thanks for sharing

Sweet, beautiful piece* – refreshing and light!

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.

Joel, your haikus are perfect. It’s not enough just to have the right number of syllables and the nature reference- the words themselves have to be beautiful and have to be poetic.

I don\’t like Haiku but this was actually good, well done.

beautiful liked it.

Beautiful words and they flow like a hymn to the Haikus.
Monica

What a beautiful picture and great sentiments.

Wow. I really love flowers, such a powerful way to describe about flower, you don’t need the picture.

p.s. could you take a peek at some of my stuff.

Just loved this article. Beautiful. Thank you so much.

Excellent job and beautiful photo for inspiration.

lovely poem!