Stay put…

The walls now explode
Stay put here in your armchair
They will be back soon.

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  • F J McCarthy on Feb 15, 2009

    Mysterious, but good.

  • postpunkpixie on Feb 16, 2009

    Very surreal, always a good thing.

  • macon on Feb 16, 2009

    i wonder who will be back.. i don’t know how to make haiku but this sounds good.

  • Carolanne Hart on Feb 16, 2009

    Your poetry is fab! I love your quirkiness ;)

  • Mermush on Feb 16, 2009

    ok wots goin on here…dont understand at all!!!! please explain….

  • Onlywaytobesure on Feb 19, 2009

    It’s a haiku, Mermush, they’re not supposed to make sense. Well, the fun ones don’t, anyway.

  • C LEBLANC on Feb 21, 2009

    it was good but i would of liked to have heard a little more added so it’d be understandable.

  • Bowler on Feb 21, 2009

    I understand why it might confuse some people, but it\\\’s a Haiku poem, so I can\\\’t add any more words. The syllable count by line goes 5 – 7 – 5. But thanks for your input- I\\\’m glad you liked it.

  • Tusaani on Feb 21, 2009

    Interesting, very spontaneous!

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