it was good but i would of liked to have heard a little more added so it’d be understandable.
Bowler on Feb 21, 2009
I understand why it might confuse some people, but it\\\’s a Haiku poem, so I can\\\’t add any more words. The syllable count by line goes 5 – 7 – 5. But thanks for your input- I\\\’m glad you liked it.