Haiku – sense of stillness and anticipation.

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Gray mist barely moves

 In swirls over still water

Nature’s shallow breath.

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  • ken bultman on Oct 7, 2009

    Very nice imagery. Refreshing.

  • Honesty on Oct 8, 2009

    This is very refreshing…

  • Michelle OLeary on Oct 14, 2009

    Glad I could offer refreshments…LOL Okay, so my sense of humor is lousy. Thank you very much for your comments! :D
    *hugs*

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