Mi-Na and Hwang, so overcome.

We would both gasp out
Exhaling our bated breath
Succumbing to us

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  • F J McCarthy on Feb 1, 2009

    Lovely,

  • papaleng on Feb 1, 2009

    oops, you\\\’re keeping me waiting.. LOL

  • Shirley Shuler on Feb 1, 2009

    I have to agree with papaleng, I’ll be waiting!!

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