This is a very moving and emotional haiku. I love the way you set up the poem in the opening lines and then bring your conflicted soul into it. Your poem is deeply philosophical.

I’m glad you didnd’t follow that old rule of 5.7.5.

Yours is 5.6.5.

I write modern haiku as well, not worrying about the syllables. I hope you can read some of mine in return?

keep writing,
Myron.

Hi, My congratulations for you.

Thank you for beeing present into my writtings, I will wait your links in order to read your works as well.
Hogs and regards.

love it, thank you.

Thank you, I love haikus, in English is not so easy for me to do them, in Spanish I can do any ammount of them, maybe one day my English will be as good as my Spanish and I will do more of them, thanks for your support.